Draw This Again

This is my second improvement process that I have done to a old picture of mine.

Here's the link to the old picture: [link]
Here's the link to the new picture: [link]

The old picture is over two years old now and this is how far I got with my skills. Tell me what you think.

Edit: This is the first contest I have entered in a long time. I really don't like them so much for my own reasons, but I decided to do this one. I already did my entry, so why not?